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Tuesday, July 20, 2010

Jhinuk

Shesh jebare October e
Giyechhilam Puri
Jhinuk kothay? Shebar kebol
Kuriyechhilam nuri

Ami tokhon nobom sreni
Ami tokhon boi
Benimadhob, Benimadhob
Tomar jhinuk koi?

Bochhor gachhe, doshok gachhe
Tobuo jhinuk khnuji
Amar moton tuio kothao
Jhinuk khnujish bujhi?

Jhinuk ra keu tokeo khnoje
Dine ebong raat e
Hoyto tara lukiye chhilo
Tor i opekkhate

Khnujto toke shomudre ar
Puri r baluchore
Ajke ora peyechhe khnuje
Onek diner pore

Onek jhinuk aj o amar
Kuriye newa baki
Ador kore tokeo jodi
Jhinuk bole daki?

Rag korbi? Korte parish
Mondo chhele bhebe
Puri r shagor, dheu tule she
Shob bhashiye debe.

5 comments:

sujaan said...

beautiful rhyme as always. Last two stanzas are awesome :)

rituparna said...

jhinuk bujhi nam hoy karo/ boddo sadamata..../tarche borong bolish amy ankibuki khata!/ nuri kurosh, utsab-e r gopon bythar jonyo/ benimadhob naiba elo, ashbe je keu onyo!!/ nosto meye nam hobe tar, kosto bhora mukh/ seikhanetei lukiye ache, mukto-paoa sukh!! takhon take jhinook deke, bolis bhalobeshe/ ekkhuni tui chol na niye sagor-rajar desh-e!

Chito said...
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Oshombhober Chhondete said...

Na hoy jodi nai ba holo Jhinuk karur naam/ Balir majhe kuriye pawa hothat-khushir daam/ Shei to Jhinuk! Shei to amar Benimadhob haay!/ Naam ta ja hoy hok-na, tate ki-i ba ashe jaay?/ Mukto ami chaini motei, noi je monikaar/ Mukto thakuk shagor-deshe. Rajkonyar haar/ Koruk alo. Ami kebol Puri r baluchore/ Khujchhi Jhinuk, hothat-pawa uttejonar tore...

Shreya said...

beautiful chondo..parisho bote!! this is very lyrical, tor hobe bujhli..! this is effortless absolutely, heenshe hochche!

Khoshra khatar jibon elomelo/ Badhano boi nai ba dekhte pelo

Jei baje chhonder tung-tang shobdo/ Dukkho ra sobbai akdom jobdo